
2008年12月28日日曜日
Christmas party!

August Rush


End of 2008!
We watched the film with drinking some wine. I really enjoyed.:-)
The friend of mine lives in Suizenji area. She is one of good friend of mine. I met her when I was in high school. She was the first frend when I entered the high. She works at a company which is in Kumamoto city but we haven't seen each other for about 1 year! I am really happy to see her today.
We will watch another film from now!lol Maybe we won't go to bed tonight.hahaha!
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2008年12月22日月曜日
Winter vacation!!!
But on Christmas day, I have a Christmas party after I finished my part time job. I am looking forward to have it!:-) I and friends will drink until the morning!!!!hihihi
I hope you have good holidays!
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2008年12月18日木曜日
I enjoying FACEBOOK!
If you have a account of facebook, please send me some messages.;-D I want to make more friends!!!;-)
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2008年12月17日水曜日
Section 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | M |
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | 1st Essay Prep | 08.10.28 | 5 | 327 | 0 | 5 | |
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | Essay -favorite- | 08.10.18 | 7 | 375 | 0 | 3 | |
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | Essay Mrs. Doubtfire | 08.11.04 | 3 | 349 | 2 | 0 | |
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | Essay Community Life | 08.11.17 | 4 | 269 | 0 | 0 | |
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | Essay Secret of Kumamoto | 08.11.28 | 4 | 289 | 0 | 0 | |
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | Essay Learning with computer | 08.12.15 | 5 | 401 | 0 | 1 | |
Totals | --- | --- | 28 | 2010 | 2 | 9 |
Key:
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
pabShowcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | BR 2-01 Real American Ice Cream | 08.10.10 | 184 | This comment makes my blog better. This was good advice for me. |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | good points of the computer | 08.12.22 | 114 | I think I gave her some good advices. |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Essay Mrs. Doubtfire | 08.11.05 | 16 | She praised on my essay. |
2.4. Most comments on: | Essay Mrs. Doubtfire | 08.11.05 | 30 | They praised on my essay. |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | My favorite class | 08.12.16 | 193 | There is no comment. |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.12.22 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 40 | I said them thank for their good comment. |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Hatsumoude | 09.01.06 | 79 | There is no comment. |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 09..01.06 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 0 | There was no comment but I will respond thank you very much. |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.It is on the right corner.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
Received comment: pab
Answer the comment: marmie
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
2-01 | BR 2-01 Real American Ice Cream | 08.10.10 | 177 | 1 |
2-02 | BR 2-02 Alice's Adventures in Wonderland | 08.10.16 | 201 | 0 |
2-03 | BR 2-03 Porco Rosso | 08.11.17 | 158 | 0 |
2-04 | BR 2-04 Princess Mononoke | 08.11.18 | 176 | 0 |
2-05 | BR 2-05 JUMANJI | 08.11.19 | 78 | 0 |
2-06 | BR 2 06 ALADDIN and His Magical Lamp | 08.11.30 | 121 | 0 |
2-07 | BR 2-07 Babe-a Pig in the City | 08.12.03 | 153 | 0 |
2-08 | BR 2-08 E.T. | 08.12.03 | 172 | 0 |
2-09 | BR 2-09 Love Actually | 08.12.04 | 248 | 0 |
2-10 | BR 2-10 Romeo and Juliet | 08.12.10 | 78 | 0 |
2-11 | BR02-11 | 09.01.06 | 170 | 0 |
2-12 | BR 02-12 Jane Eyre | 09.01.08 | 208 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.BR 2-09 Love Actually This is my best book review. There is some reasons why I chose this one. Because I really enjoyed reading this book and I enjoyed writing the book review. So it is my best book review.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | √ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | √ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | √ | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | √ | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | √ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | √ | |
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4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | √ | |
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | √ | |
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | √ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- I tried to the readers could enjoy with my blog.
- I conrtibuted many pictures and movies. I think it made the readers fun.
- I made many kind of links on my blog. It is easy to search for readers.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).- At first I didn't write in my blog but I became enjoying it. I wrote some diaries and movie and book reviews.
- I got many good information from my classmates blog. Classmates blog made me fun.
- i learned many kind ofunction of computer and English grammer. This class is very good for me. I really enjoyed.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
- I think I should learn English grammer much more. It is difficult for me to write anything if I don't know some adequate words.
- If I (you) use some difficult words, I (you) should better to explain the wordss to easy one.
- I think readers enjoy reading the blog if there are some nice pictures or movies. In addition there are some impression of them, readers enjoy reading.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
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2008年12月16日火曜日
My favorite class
These classes teach me interest of learning. It is very useful and interesting. It is a pity for me to take these classes only more 2 times. I want to continue to study about Introduction of Japanese Culture after the class finished.
Do you have any favorite classes in this campus? To find them, it makes your school life more interesting and usefully! Enjoy your own school life!;-D
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2008年12月15日月曜日
Essay Learning with computer

Free Hug!

2008年12月10日水曜日
Learning with computers
Wtha do you think the charmest point of computer?
You know, there are many strong points. I think it is to communication with so many people who lives in oversea. It needs much money to going abroad, but using computer, we can talk with unknown people and get some good informations.
BR 2-10 Romeo and Juliet
This story has been read for about 400 years!! Shakespeare has special ability to draw into his original world!
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Brainstorming. Learning with computers.
Typing
Convenience
Communication
Blogging
Information
Knowledge
Pictures
Writing
Reading
Mailling
Dictionaries
Translation
Learning foreign languages
Newest information
2008年12月4日木曜日
BR 2-09 Love Actually

2008年12月3日水曜日
BR 2-08 E.T.
Do you know this story? This is very famous one, I think. I watched this for a movie when I was a child. At that time, I remember that I was afraid of E.T. because it was an alien. And I haven't seen the movie of alien before. After I grow up, I watched this film again and I was moved. This is my first time to read. It was easy to understand the content.
This story is very old one. I don't remember when I watched this first.
One day, an alien got lost on earth. It is E.T. and then three children met him and tried to have communication. E.T. became speak some languages and he made some friends. The goverment tried to catch E.T. because he was an alien and they thought he harm children and human. But E.T. cured the child's injury. He was very kind and gentle alien.
At last, the three children finally could take him to the spaceship. This story always makes our heart warm.
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BR 2-07 Babe-a Pig in the City

I read this book "Babe- a Pig in the city". I chose this book because I have watched this for film before. It was not so difficult for me to understand this story. I think most of students know this story. Yes, this story is base on a brave, cute and funny pig.
One day, he leaved for a farm, and go to the city. Then he met a lot of animals. In this story, animals speak English. So we can enjoy their conversation. The animals are almost cute and nice, so I like this story. Babe is a very strong and brave pig. If I could speak with him, I want to take a trip. The trip must be fun!
By the way, do you know "Special Kibi-dango"? It is one of special item with Draemon. If the animals eat it, they can talk with human. I really want the "Special Kibi-dango".lol
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Christmas songs...
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Wintertime!

Music -A cappella-

Short trip to Tamana!

I went Tamana with my friend yesterday. We went Shirasagi no Ashiyu. Do you know it? Tamana is famous for spas. I don't have many chances to visit Tamana so it was my first experience to going Ashiyu. Have you taken Ashiyu before? There are a lot of Ryokans in Tamana city. The natural spa is very good quality.
When we arrive at the place, first we took off our shoes and we tried to go into it. The heat of the hot water is about 40℃. We have been taken for 1 hour with talking. After we stop taking Ashiyu, my body get warming. Ashiyu is know for one of treatment for frostbite and kibe. And I think it is also good treatment for people who have a poor blood circulation.
I want to visit Ashiyu and Tamana again.;-)
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2008年12月1日月曜日
I LOVE Kanye West

I was taought his songs by a friend of mine who comes from the U.S. My most favorite song is "Can't Tell Me Nothing". And "Homecoming" is also good one! I will show you a song of him from You-Tube. I hope you like it! Enjoy!:^) [88 words]
2008年11月30日日曜日
BR 2 06 ALADDIN and His Magical Lamp

I read ALLADIN and His Magical Lamp. This story is very famous one. I have watched this for a film before.
One day, a man whose name is Alladin found an old lamp and he tried to rubbed it. And suddenly a fairy came up from the lamp! He was very surprised at the scene. He thought that he was in dream. And the fairy could talk.
If I were in the scene, I must get surprise! I always think I wish I could talk with fairies and toys. It's very romantic and interesting! This book was easy to read. I had known this story but it is different between reading and watching with animations. Reading rouses original emotion and imagination.
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Music Review

He is very good at playing guitar. I like soft melody very much. The guitar sound makes me comfortable. One of my friend can play guitar very well and he plays and sings Kazuyoshi Saitoh's songs. I hope you will be able to listen this artist's songs.
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2008年11月26日水曜日
Essay Secret of Kumamoto


I will write about a secret of my favorite activity and secret of Kumamoto. In Kumamoto, there are many kind of cafeterias. How many cafeterias do you know? I often go Doutor, Starbucks, Moricone and Sunmarc cafeteria. Do you know these? And my favorite cafeteria which is secret place is "The Sweets Bar". Do you know it? Maybe I think most of people doesn't know that. It is on Washington St. which near Kado-Makku. It is difficult to find the cafeteria. There is no signboard on the street.
Brainstorm of essay
-Place-
downtown in Kumamoto
it's not so far from KGU
on Washington st.
-Atmosphere-
fashionable place
little tranquil
little dark in the building
difficult to find the place
-People-
men and women of all ages
reagardless of age or sex
Free writing of my essay
I want to know good cafeteria in Kumamoto city more and more!;-) If you know good place, please tell me.
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2008年11月25日火曜日
MR 2-05 I AM LEGEND

MR 2-04 Enchanted

2008年11月19日水曜日
BR 2-05 JUMANJI


Best essay nomination 2

Review of my old trip to Hawaii

Have you ever been to Hawaii before? I have been there when I was fifteen years old. Everybody know how beautiful Hawaii is. Of course it was my first visit to Hawaii and I was so excited! Sky is wide, sun is shining radiantly and people were very cheerfull. And I was surprised with sea because it has 3 colors. Can you imagine what I saying? These are deep blue, light blue and more light blue. I have seen the sea which has just one color in Japane before. Sea in Hawaii is something speciall!:)
I am planning to going to Hawaii to see my friend next Spring. There are a lot of Japanese in Hawaii so I do not need to speak in English. I do want to speak in English------!!!lol If you have chance to visit Hawaii, try to swim in Waikiki beach. The sunset view is so emotional.
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Best essay nomination
I read an essay of Mrs. Doubtfire at Miyo's blog. She wrote about her family and her father particularly. I really enjoyed reading her essay because her essay was easy to understand. She sometime fight with her father because her opinion and her father's opinion is different. I have also felt the feeling with my parents. I understand what she wants to say.
And she said she sometime feel frustration with her future and school life. I feel it too. Students always grope for their future-life. I think it is very important. When we were Jr. high students or high school students, almost student go to a higher school but after we graduate the University, we have to work... It is natural to feel frustration and worry about own future-life.
I really enjoyed reading her essay and it made me strong.
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2008年11月18日火曜日
lunch with my friend♬

I like Italian foods very much. Pizza, Spaghetti and Penne. Penne is a kind of pasta. There is some Italian restaurant in downtown. Which restaurant have you ever gone? I sometime go Moricone, Caprichoza and Qurague. My favorite one is Qurague. It pronounce "Kurage" in Japanese. One of my friend work at the restaurant. It is behind Daiei department store. Check it out!;-D
If you have any good information of restaurant, please tell me!
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BR 2-04 Princess Mononoke

My most favorite take is when Sun and Ashitaka fight with Eboshi at forest of Mononoke. I can feel the reality in the book and I was very excited.
This tale teachs us the importance of the nature. Nowadays people cut so many trees and pollute the atmonphere. And animals have no foods, place to live and care their children. People don't care about the animals so much.
My most favorite part in this story is "Live! You are beautiful." which is Ashitaka said. Sun is human but she lives as a wild dog. Ashitaka tried to understand Sun's opinion and Eboshi's opinion but there is no way to live together.
Hayao Miyazaki produced many interesting stories. Especially Princess Mononoke is a precious srory for people of today.
http://www.nausicaa.net/miyazaki
2008年11月17日月曜日
★★Review of my favorite★★

BR 2-03 Porco Rosso

I read a book Porco Rosso. Have you ever heard this title before? I think most of Japanese know this story. It is Kurenai-no-buta in Japanese. Porco Rosso is title in English.
I like this story very very much. I don't know how many times I watched this film from now. I had watched this film but I haven't read. I know this sroy so it is not so difficult to understand. Which character do you like? I like Gina very much. She is kind and very sexy.
This story is based on Adriatic in Italy. Porco is a pilot and he fight with his enemies in the sky. Gina is very popular among the pilots. Every pilots in Adriatic come to the restaurant bar which is Gina running. And Gina sings at the bar and it heals the pilots heart. Porco is not a human. This story tells us about a friendship and true love I think.
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Porco_Rosso
http://disney.go.com/disneyvideos/animatedfilms/studioghibli/porcosynopsis.html
http://www.nausicaa.net/miyazaki/porco
Essay Community Life
I want to write about international friends community. I like foreign culture, music, people and of course English. It was ten years ago when I started study English. The old ALT taught me how interesting to talk with foreigners. Ten years ago, I was not interested in English and foreign culture at all. And then I have been liked it since he taught me about it.
My international friends community is very important in my life. I have a lot of friends whose come from oversea. Australia, China, Korea, the U.S., Uganda and Italy. Of course I have some friends of exchange student in KGU. I often see them at the campus and talk with them about own daily life. And yesterday I had dinner with Italy friend and Korean friend. The Korean friend is student of Kumamoto Univesity and the other is lives in Kumamoto for 6 years. She had married Japanese and she can speak Japanese and Kumamoto-ben very well. We talked about daily life and own boyfriend. We drank beer, cocktails, whiskies and Korean sake Makkori.
They teach me not only interest of chat in English but also difficulty of it. I always bring my electric dictionary and I always think strongly "I have to study much harder..."
I have studied English for about ten years but my skill is not enough yet. My international friend community makes my life enrich. It is my treasure!
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2008年11月12日水曜日
MR 2-03 IN HER SHOES

Free write
Exchange students teach English for Japanese students and we teach them Japanese. I don't need to go English conversation school like NOVA and ZIOS. I stay 3 or 4 hours at dorm when I go there almost till 10 or 11 o'clock. We watch some films, play games and doing some homeworks with exchange students. We talk each other with electric dictionary but it's good for me to know unknown words. And exchange students also try to understand Japanese. Sometime I don't know how to explain Japanese grammar.
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Community life
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2008年11月6日木曜日
***Roses***
Especially If you are interested in roses, have you ever been to Agricultural Park which is in Koshi city before? The Rose Festival is held 2 times in a year(spring and autum). I went the festival with my grandmother and mother. There are so many kind of roses in a huge garden and people can take pictures and take videos.

And there is a very wide ground. We can play catch, play baseball with family and friends. You should go the park in spring.:-)
http://www.country-park.jp
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