1st Essay Prep

Student ID: 05160

Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1c

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	1st Essay Prep	08.10.28	5	327	0	5
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	Essay -favorite-	08.10.18	7	375	0	3
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	Essay Mrs. Doubtfire	08.11.04	3	349	2	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	Essay Community Life	08.11.17	4	269	0	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	Essay Secret of Kumamoto	08.11.28	4	289	0	0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	Essay Learning with computer	08.12.15	5	401	0	1
Totals	---	---	28	2010	2	9

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
  

2.0. Comments

pab

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	BR 2-01 Real American Ice Cream	08.10.10	184	This comment makes my blog better. This was good advice for me.
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	good points of the computer	08.12.22	114	I think I gave her some good advices.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Essay Mrs. Doubtfire	08.11.05	16	She praised on my essay.
2.4. Most comments on:	Essay Mrs. Doubtfire	08.11.05	30	They praised on my essay.
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	My favorite class	08.12.16	193	There is no comment.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.12.22	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	40	I said them thank for their good comment.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Hatsumoude	09.01.06	79	There is no comment.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	09..01.06	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	0	There was no comment but I will respond thank you very much.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

It is on the right corner.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

Received comment: pab

Answer the comment: marmie

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	BR 2-01 Real American Ice Cream	08.10.10	177	1
2-02	BR 2-02 Alice's Adventures in Wonderland	08.10.16	201	0
2-03	BR 2-03 Porco Rosso	08.11.17	158	0
2-04	BR 2-04 Princess Mononoke	08.11.18	176	0
2-05	BR 2-05 JUMANJI	08.11.19	78	0
2-06	BR 2 06 ALADDIN and His Magical Lamp	08.11.30	121	0
2-07	BR 2-07 Babe-a Pig in the City	08.12.03	153	0
2-08	BR 2-08 E.T.	08.12.03	172	0
2-09	BR 2-09 Love Actually	08.12.04	248	0
2-10	BR 2-10 Romeo and Juliet	08.12.10	78	0
2-11	BR02-11	09.01.06	170	0
2-12	BR 02-12 Jane Eyre	09.01.08	208	0
2-13
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

BR 2-09 Love Actually This is my best book review. There is some reasons why I chose this one. Because I really enjoyed reading this book and I enjoyed writing the book review. So it is my best book review.

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	√
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	√
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	√
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?		√
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	√
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	√
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	√
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	√
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	√
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)		√
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	√
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	√
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	√
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		√
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	√
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		√
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: Some interesting pictures. Movies from You-Tube	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. "Truman Show" It show us information of the film. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_Am_Legend This URL is about interesting information of this film.	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. I tried to the readers could enjoy with my blog.
   


2. I conrtibuted many pictures and movies. I think it made the readers fun.
   


3. I made many kind of links on my blog. It is easy to search for readers.
   

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• At first I didn't write in my blog but I became enjoying it. I wrote some diaries and movie and book reviews.
  


• I got many good information from my classmates blog. Classmates blog made me fun.
  


• i learned many kind ofunction of computer and English grammer. This class is very good for me. I really enjoyed.
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• I think I should learn English grammer much more. It is difficult for me to write anything if I don't know some adequate words.
  


• If I (you) use some difficult words, I (you) should better to explain the wordss to easy one.
  


• I think readers enjoy reading the blog if there are some nice pictures or movies. In addition there are some impression of them, readers enjoy reading.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).


2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
   


3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
   

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